Category Archives: Writing tools

Fish and sentences

Let’s look at a few pages from Stanley Fish’s How to Write a Sentence.

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Outrunning the Critic

From The 3AM Epiphany by Brian Kiteley, this exercise is called “Outrunning the Critic.” I’ve summarized it here: Write one hundred short sentences about a character in a piece of your fiction. Don’t lift your fingers from your keyboard for all one hundred … Continue reading

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Global revision

This is an example of global revision as the result of adding material.

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Characterization and global revision

From Brian Kiteley’s excellent book The 3A.M. Epiphany, you’ll find this exercise useful.

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English 4420 and characterization

Address these questions: How do your characters act in the face of opposition/desires that contrast with their own? Do they plan, try to persuade, take physical action, for example? Describe three events that your central character remembers and that influence … Continue reading

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Continuing toward characterization

I found this exercise useful when trying to create characters. From Alice LaPlante’s Method and Madness, here is the PDF.

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Cinderella, conflict, and connection

Look at this view of Cinderella, from Janet Burroway’s Writing Fiction. Consider also these contrasting views of conflict and connection when plotting/characterizing, which are also from Burroway’s book.

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Other commandments/conventions

“So it’s always critical to keep in mind that there are no rules in fiction, only conventions that have been built up over the years based on the way that writers have crafted their stories. (A convention is ‘an established … Continue reading

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Football haiku and editorializing

These football haiku may be dated, but here they are. Here are some examples of excessive editorializing. Remember, “The artist seeks out the luminous detail and presents it. He does not comment.” –Ezra Pound

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What can we expect from sentences?

An exercise by Donald Barthelme Assignment: Write a sentence with some attention to the notes below. What can we reasonable expect, or even demand, of the sentences in fiction? The first thing I want a sentence to do is surprise … Continue reading

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