Peer review

While comparing fragments of the rough and structurally revised draft, answer the following questions for your peer:

  1. How has this fragment of the structurally revised draft been dramatically revised? What has changed?
  2. What’s been added? What’s been cut?
  3. How has characterization changed?
  4. How has the setting become clearer? What themes seem to be developing?
  5. How might tension be increasing?

Be sure offer additional suggestions and/or address any questions your peer has about his or her draft.