How do we move from an exterior to the inner life of a character when writing in a third-person limited point of view? This is one method. Write:
- at least three sentences that are exterior descriptions of the character and setting
- one sentence that explicitly labels itself as part of the character’s thoughts about the setting. Use “he thought” or “she thought” or something similar.
- at least three sentences which are not labeled that present the
- character’s inner life
- one sentence that explicitly labels itself as part of the character’s thoughts
- at least three sentences that are exterior descriptions of the setting
Can you cut the labels?