These suggestions are from Charlie Jane Anders’s “Description Without Boring the Reader or Yourself” on, I think, I09. (Her book, btw, is very good.)
- Commit to never being boring
- Engage all five senses: sights, sounds, smells, tastes, textures; temperature
- Try being super terse: Less is more, vivid without length
- Dynamic rather than static: how might the description tell a story? Evolution not snapshot
- Project feelings onto inanimate objects
- Give your character a reaction to what is being described