2250 final exam Fall 17

This take-home final exam is worth twenty-five points. It is due by the end of the final exam period on December 12 from 9:00-10:50 am. The late paper policy as described by the syllabus applies to the final exam. Turn the exam in by emailing it to me before it is due or by attending and writing the exam in person on December 12th. When you email the exam, include “English 2250” and your name in the subject line.

Using the attached examples, write a brief essay in which you read the short story as a textbook on fiction writing and read the poem as a textbook on writing poetry. Quote the story or poem to support your assertions about it. Focus on craft, not theme. You may use David Starkey’s Creative Writing and any notes you’ve taken as resources while writing the exam. You essay should be between two and five double-spaced pages.

After you write your essay, draft a prose poem that uses techniques you’ve identified from both fiction and poetry writing. The prose poem has no length requirement, but should meet the requirements of its form. Feel free to review those requirements as they are found in our textbook.

Answer at least the following questions as your write about this story:

  • What did you learn about characterization from the story?
  • Describe power shifts that lead toward the crisis moment.
  • Which fiction writing technique was best exemplified in the story? Why?
  • How might you apply a technique exemplified by the story in your own work?
  • What technique does the story inspire you to avoid? Why?

Answer at least the following questions as you write about this poem:

  • How are images in the poem created?
  • What does figurative language add to the poem?
  • Which poetry writing technique was best exemplified in the poem? Why?
  • How might you apply a technique exemplified by the poem in your own work?
  • What technique does the poem inspire you to avoid? Why?

Don’t forget to draft your prose poem.

If you have questions about this exam, please email me.

 

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Characterization and work

This exercise has its roots in Benjamin Percy’s excellent Thrill Me: Essays on Fiction, specifically the “Get a Job” chapter.

Characterize by writing about the character’s job. Address at least the following prompts:

  • How did the character get the job?
  • How does the setting/dress of the character change as a result of it?
  • Describe the character’s relationships with at least three people at work.
  • Describe/contrast these relationships with at least three people not at work.
  • How does the job change/shape/impact the non-job relationships?
  • Given this job, what point of view makes sense? How is the character likely to see the world?
  • List three metaphors this character would use.
  • What new language/jargon/jokes does the character learn as a result of the job?
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2010 Proposal example

In a small group, read and grade this APA-style example proposal. Use our criteria. Note any problems you see for our later discussion.

Emily Hanna

Rethinking Recycling: Why Reusing Needs to Be User Friendly

Many people hold on to the belief that recycling is unnecessary, and even among those who believe in reducing waste, some find recycling to be inconvenient. Facilities do not always exist to handle certain materials (such as packaging and batteries), and some towns require residents to go through elaborate sorting processes or transport their recycling to a central location, all of which can seem like extra tasks in a busy world. But recycling is becoming increasingly important. According to Zellar (2008), in an article for National Geographic entitled “Recycling: The Big Picture,” “Every shrink – wrapped toy or tool or medical device we buy bears the stamp of its energy – intensive history . . . . A product’s true cost includes greenhouse gases emitted in its creation as well as use, and pollutants that cause acid rain, smog, and fouled waterways” (para. 4). Essentially, recycling is necessary because of the amount of resources and energy required to produce new items from scratch. Furthermore, landfills have become too large to accommodate in some areas, and they emit unwanted gases that damage the environment (Kaufman, 2009). Because of the repercussions of wastefulness, recycling is essential. Thus, it should be universally available and streamlined for maximum benefits.

At Oregon State University, the administration, faculty, and students are used to seeing and using recycling containers to pitch water bottles, surplus paper from printers, and cardboard (Oregon State University, 2014). However, the administration does not systematically implement the recycling services on campus, creating misunderstanding about what can be recycled and where. The types of bins and services available vary by building and department, making it hard for those who live, work, and study on campus to make the most efficient recycling choices. For example, the residence halls have commingled recycling that accommodates some plastic, metal, cartons, and paper, whereas the library has different bins for paper or bottles and cans only. This difference means that, in some campus locations, most waste continues to be sent to landfills. In addition, many of the vendors and departments on campus continue to use products — such as waxed paper cups, coffee – cup lids, and plastic utensils — that cannot be recycled on campus. To solve these problems, Oregon State University should implement a reorganized system that includes matching bins across campus to accommodate a wider range of items and the systematic replacement of everyday items that cannot be recycled with ecofriendly or recyclable options.

Streamlined bins will allow staff, students, and faculty to learn about one recycling system and to use it regularly. If the recycling system in the library matches the system in the Memorial Union, those on campus will be less likely to toss things into the trash because they are not sure if it is recyclable. The University of Maryland (2010) has worked hard, and had success, with such measures on their campus. The school’s website states that one of the university’s goals was to make steps toward a “zero waste” initiative. Specifically, “These improvements include installing more recycling and compost collection bins, implementing education and outreach activities, and eliminating the distribution of condiment packets and instead creating condiment stations near food courts” (University of Maryland, 2010, para. 2). The university also made trash bins harder to access, allotting each faculty member a tiny desk bin that he or she then had to take t o a central location. Such initiatives combined with a sleek, well – run recycling system increases recycling participation on campus.

New — and more — bins will require Oregon State to invest in additional education on recycling for members of the community. That is, students, faculty, and staff will need to be taught what can go in each bin and why these measures are so important. Things tend to go awry if new systems are not accompanied by clear instructions. According to Kaufman (2009), such a which bans the use of polystyrene foam containers, said that some citizens had unwittingly put the plant -based alternatives into cans for recycling, where they had melted and had gummed up the works” (para. 26). Such problems can be avoided, she added, when education is part of the initiative.

A similar mishap occurred in Santa Monica, California when residents mistook compostable cutlery for plastic and put them into the recycling bins. She wrote, “Josephine Miller, an environmental official for the city of Santa Monica, Calif., The new system and education initiatives should be combined with a movement away from products that are the hardest to dispose of ethically and with concern for the environment. This not only limits waste, but also off sets some of the initial costs of the new endeavors. For example, the University of Maryland began using compostable takeout containers that cost a bit more than the old products (University of Maryland, 2010). However, they combined the use of these new products with an emphasis on using reusable plates, cups, and silverware. As a result, the food services produced less waste, needed fewer takeout containers, and spent less money. Zellar confirmed that one of the best ways to lessen the amount of waste being produced is to move away from heavily packaged items that contain unrecyclable elements.

Critics of recycling initiatives often cite wasted energy during collection, high costs, and poor user – friendliness as reasons that recycling does not work. Zellar (2008) made note of some opponents who felt the environmental impact of collecting recyclable waste offsets the benefits of recycling. However, Zellar demonstrated that creating brand new products actually uses significantly more energy than an efficiently run, frequently used recycling system. If members of the Oregon State University community are encouraged to use a simplified (but still comprehensive) system, the environmental impact is much smaller. Similarly, the costs of such a program are mitigated by using fewer disposable items and by a decreased need to haul trash to landfills. Zellar also noted that “some municipalities . . . are starting to demand that businesses help cover the costs of recycling” (para. 14), certain materials that are expensive or difficult to recycle. This approach has the benefit of lowering recycling costs for consumers, along with the bonus of discouraging companies from creating and distributing products that are bad for the environment. Oregon State could, then, ask the city of Corvallis to consider such a measure.

According to sources cited by Kaufman (2009), large institutions have the most potential for affecting change in how waste and recycling are handled because they produce more waste and, thus, have the ability to change demand for certain products and services. She continued, “[C]ustomers will have to be taught to think about the destination of every throwaway if the zero – waste philosophy is to prevail, environmental officials say” (para. 27). As home base to thousands of employees and students, Oregon State University has the privilege of being an institution that can make a positive impact through education about and implementation of a comprehensive, user – friendly recycling system. If you see the need for this change to occur, contact your administrative officials in Business Affairs and tell them you want to see improved recycling efforts on your campus!

 

Works Cited

Kaufman, L. (2009, Oct. 19). Nudging recycling from less waste to none. The New York Times . Retrieved from http://www.nytimes.com/

Oregon State University. (2014). Recycling FAQ. Retrieved from http://fa.oregonstate.edu/recycling/about – us/recycling – faq

University of Maryland. (2010). Recycling, composting, and waste reduction. Retrieved from http://www.sustainability.umd.edu/content/campus/recycling.php#SingleStream

Zellar, Jr., T. (2008). Recycling: The big picture. National Geographic . Retrieved from http://ngm.natio nalgeographic.com/

 

 

 

 

 

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Proposals and urgency

Consider these examples of early paragraphs in proposal essays.

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Humor

Thrill Me mentions repose in contrast with action. Could humor work as well? From the excellent 3 A.M. Epiphany, consider these two exercises. Draft an example of one that might work for your fiction portfolio.

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Final proposal planning

With the reading for today in mind, do the following.

  1. State your tentative thesis. Notice, from 364, “Come up with a tentative thesis that identifies the problem and proposes a solution. Use this statement to guide you as you write.”
    1. What else do you have to know to persuade your audience toward this solution? When will you do more research?
    2. What main points will your proposal have to make? List them. Leave a gap between the items on the list.
      1. Think about which of your current sources support which items on the list of main points you just made.
      2. How convincing are your sources for your audience? Why?
    3. Connect sources and main points on the list by writing the names of sources in the gap.
    4. Briefly explain the connection between the sources and the points.
  2. List other possible solutions you’ll need to acknowledge fairly.
    1. Which sources document them?
    2. How will you reply to these alternative solutions?
    3. Which sources can help you reply?
  3. Share with a peer.
    1. Which spots seem weak in terms of persuading the audience? Why?
    2. What are two strengths of the planning?
  4. Email 1 and 2 to me.

 

Here is an example of a successful proposal planning email. It follows the steps above:

1. If UVU allocates more funding toward  mental health education and more resources toward those who suffer from mental health issues, we will retain more students with and without mental disorders.

A. I need to research more about universities that have implemented more resources, conversation, and attention to those students who suffer from mental illnesses. I will do more research all through November to really get all the information I can to create a very strong, persuasive paper.

i. My proposal will include the following points:

• Educating students who do or do not suffer from a mental illness will lower the stigma around it creating a more open conversation and comfortable environment.

– “Challenging the Stigma” article: Explicitly explains how universities’ stigma around mental illness prevents students from reaching out for help.

• Creating a focus on students with mental illnesses and ensuring they are succeeding through college will increase retention and growth in students entering the workforce benefiting the economy.

– (Need source)

• Professors need to take mental illness as seriously as a physical illness.

– “Invisible Disabilities” article: This resource discusses how “invisible disabilities” like mental illnesses are often overlooked in comparison to physical disabilities. While those are still important, creating an environment where students with mental disabilities feel like their problems are taken seriously will lead to a better campus life.

• Already implemented mental health resources need to be advertised during orientation for freshman and incoming students

– “Comparative Study” article: Talks about universities that thoroughly advertise mental health resources versus those that do not and how it impacts a campus.

ii. My sources are convincing because they are all peer reviewed research giving hard facts of the benefits of the points I have listed.

 

2. Others solutions/arguments I will need to address are: (I need resources to address them logically and with facts. Until then I will give my opinion.)

• Students can use the already available Accessibility Services.

-I have emailed the ASD to see what accommodations are exactly available for students with mental illnesses. That information understandably is not available on their site but it does make it a tad more difficult for students to access help. I also plan to research more how affected those accommodations are.

• There is no way to force a student with mental health needs to seek help.

-Even though we cannot force a student to seek help, it is better to have the resources openly available in the case they do reach out versus not advertising them because they might not be utilized.

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Quotation, paraphrase, and summary

Quotation: According to linguist Fredrick Jones, “This is a prodigious locality for morphemes; not elsewhere” (128).

Paraphrase: To paraphrase linguist Fredrick Jones, rather than some other spot words ought to be placed here (128).

Summary: To summarize linguist Fredrick Jones, insert words here (128).

 

 

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Beginnings

 

This exercise comes from Brian Kiteley’s excellent book The 3 A.M. Epiphany. We’ll talk about and slightly alter the exercise during class.

After that exercise, complete this one.

Constrast the two.

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Revision example

First, mid-process, and as accepted for publication drafts are separated by asterisks.

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Pallets

Pallets, you know, the wood frames used to move stacks of goods around warehouses, into and out of the backs of trucks. They are very low. You could build one by setting three three-foot two by fours on their narrow sides. Underneath them nail three-foot slats at right angles to the two by fours, at each end to end, and across the middle. Lots of slats with space between them. On top of the two by fours nail more slats six or seven, each a few inches from its neighbor. These pallets on the museum floor look to be made of marble. White and black.

I remember trying to learn how to use a pallet jack. They have long levers and three wheels, one at the base of the lever and the other two at the ends of long flat forks. The lever stands up so you can push or pull the pallet riding on the jack. Roll the jack under the pallet, so the forks extend through it. You have to roll over the some of the slats to do this. Pull the lever and the hydraulics will push the wheels down lifting the pallet and whatever is on it enough so it can all be rolled into the dark corner of the warehouse. Once the pallet is in the corner, squeeze the lever on the lever and the wheels will retract, making the jack flat enough again it can be rolled out from under the pallet.

These pallets are made of marble, white and black.

 

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College Bookstore Shipping and Receiving: A Triptych

After Jesse Amado’s Me, We

 

I

After work we would take wooden pallets, carry them to my car. Some were broken beyond use, grey with oil, dirt, and travel. Others were new, prickly, with the faintest smells of pine and diesel. My elderly car was the color of champaign and we crammed them in the back, hauled one last time, for kindling up the canyon. Today all the campsites have metal signs, red letters on a white background: No Burning Pallets. Fires are permitted. Logs. Loosened bundles of newsprint. Not pallets.

 

II

The UPS driver would yell, “Stand aside! Working man coming through!” Little, wiry, a black mustache bigger than anything I could manage even today, he would charge through us, hand truck high with boxes. Before school started each year, he would pull pallet jacks and stacks taller than he was. I remember his sweat. Rarely, when we were the last delivery of his day, he would sit in the office and argue with my boss, his old friend, about unions and government and God and anything to keep having a conversation, to keep silence from between them. He’s retired, hair silver now, but his voice still empties the bladders of college boys.

 

III

You can race pallet jacks. One foot on a fork, pushing with the other, and steering with the tow bar. Carefully. They turn sharp enough to throw you. She taught me this, one of the women who worked there. I traded use of my car for rides to and from the airport at Thanksgiving and Christmas. House sat for her once. Tried to give her cat medicine each day that week. I bought her dinners and we watched Truly Madly Deeply once. Two me’s who never made it to we.

 

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College Bookstore Shipping and Receiving: A Couplet

After Jesse Amado’s Me, We, 1999, granite and marble

 

I.

The UPS driver would yell, “Stand aside! Working man coming through!” Small, wiry, a black mustache bigger than anything I could manage even today, he would charge through us, hand truck piled high with cartons, stacked so tall he would hold the dolly with one hand and stretch the other up to steady the top box. He filled empty aisles of the warehouse with piles of crates, shrink-wrapped and shiny white on pallets. Sweat would blacken his uniform, fanning out over his chest like a wise man’s beard. Rarely, when we were the last delivery of his day, he would sit in the office and argue with my boss, his old friend, about unions and government and God and anything to keep having a conversation, to keep silence from coming between them. He’s retired, black hair white now, but his voice still freezes college boys with fear.

 

II.

You can race pallet jacks. One foot on a fork, pushing with the other, and steering with the tow bar. Carefully. They turn sharp enough to throw you. She taught me this, one of the women there. After work, we would carry wooden pallets to my car. Some were broken beyond use, almost black with oil, dirt, and travel. Others were new, prickly, with the faintest smells of white pine and diesel. We crammed them in the back of my car, hauled them one last time, for kindling, up the canyon. I’d let her use my car over Thanksgiving and Christmas break if she’d drive me to and from the airport. House sat for her once. Tried to force-feed medicine to her sick black and white cat each day that week. Chased it under her bed. I bought her dinners and we watched Truly Madly Deeply once. Two mes who never made it to we.

 

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Finding sources

With the reading assignment in mind and in small groups, answer the following questions. Send me an email with your group’s answers and a list of group members. We’ll talk about what you found once you’ve sent the email.

  1. How might one source lead to another?
  2. What are differences between primary and secondary sources?
  3. What are differences between scholarly and popular sources?
  4. How might you determine if a source is scholarly?
  5. What kinds of sources do college professor expect? Why?
  6. What is a book’s index? Why might one be useful?
  7. What kinds of information can be found at USA.gov or the Library of Congress website?
  8. Which of the general databases listed in our text could be useful for the problem/solution you’re working on?
  9. What are good keyword search strategies? What works when conducting keyword searches?
  10. What kinds of questions should you ask if you conduct interviews?
  11. What tips for conducting interviews does the book suggest?
  12. What difficulties are associated with surveys and questionnaires?

 

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